Talk:Sun Hee Seo's portfolio page

-- Lawrence Moultrie 18:40, 30 April 2011 (EDT)

Sun Hee Seo,

Your project looks good. Your project is clearly labeled and defined. Your links are precise they bring you right to your next page. I like your web Media essential Guide to Online teaching. This web is clearly define and self-explanatory. I especially like your purpose it is written extremely well.

Learning Outcomes

· At the conclusion of this course, students will be able to:

· State the meaning of online learning community

· Identify the process of online learning

· Explain how teaching tips can be useful for online instruction

· Making class mangement plan by hand

· State examples of online teaching tips that can be used in facilitate online discussion

Understand the benefits of effective feedback

This is very clear and I do not think it could be explained any better.

Your project is well done and I would be able to use it if I had to teach on a course on it. Great Job.

In your fourth Bullet you misspelled Management you forgot the second A.

Instructor comments on your draft units -- Jz833665 11:11, 3 May 2011 (EDT)

Sun Hee, I'm pleased to see all the progress you've made in this project. I raise the following issues for you to consider as you refine your mini-course.

1) your objective: "Learners will be able to design and choose to use appropriate strategies in response to online teaching guild results." I'm not sure what you mean exactly by saying "in response to teaching guild results" 2) Guide learner participation and engagement: Before each activity such as viewing a video or read a paper, say a few words to guide the learner about what to focus on. It is always a good idea to highlight a few questions to drive such activities. 3) The study guide documents you've created read pretty dense. You can re-work on these to better synthesize your suggestions and make your points more accessible. You may think about using bulletined lists to highlight your suggestions (Your unit 3 has done this). Providing specific examples is always a good strategy. 4) Have you thought about using a culminating task to drive and integrate the learners' learning about this topic, like what we are doing for the Design Project? 5) You don't seem to have address the following outcomes adequately:"Identify the process of online learning" "State examples of online teaching tips that can be used in facilitate online discussion" "Understand the benefits of effective feedback"