User talk:Kevin Drown

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Welcome to KNILT! We hope you will contribute much and well. You will probably want to read the help pages. Again, welcome and have fun! Janewilde (talk) 16:44, 26 January 2014 (EST)

Initial feedback -- Janewilde (talk) 16:03, 18 February 2014 (EST)

Nice job on your portfolio, though it took me a while to sort through your MANY pages. Here's a list. There is no way to delete the extras, but let's make sure that going forward you don't end up getting mixed up.

Kevin_Drown's_portfolio_page - just has a giant picture of Mandela.

Kevin_Drown_portfolio - has the outline and some text, no picture (the reason the pic didn't work is because you misspelled ".jpg")

Kevin_Drown - your personal page, lovely picture. You do not need to do anything more here, this was an optional play around page.

User:Kevin_Drown - your portfolio page that has Mandela outline and text. Please link this one to the course page.

Here is how you can make the Mandela picture a bit smaller. You have in double brackets image:Nelson Mandela On Education.jpg|left I recommend image:Nelson Mandela On Education.jpg|thumb|400px|left You can make it 300px wide if you like. But setting the width will leave you more room for your text.

Your topic /intent is well written, you have two excellent resources.

You have a jump on the objectives and I will argue with you about these (the way they are formatted) when we get to that in the process but you have good stuff to work with. :)

There is one thing missing from the first section. And it will be missing from everyone's until I jump up and down and convince everyone what I am talking about. :) I want you to address "outcomes." as I define in my study guide last week. These are the big idea goals related to the type of learning you want your students (teachers) to gain. Take a look at the study guide and let me know if you need help.