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Talk:TOEFL ibt Independent Writing Step-by-step

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Instructor comment on your lessons -- Jz833665 09:46, 8 May 2010 (EDT)

The units you've drafted look in a good shape. A few improvements you may further make:

  • Add a resources page to acknowledge sources you've cited/used (e.g., essay examples), and make sure there is copyright violation.
  • At the end of each lesson, after the assignment, you may add a reflection section to briefly highlight what the learners should have understood through the activities/assignments.
  • Re. the example essays, it would be helpful for the learners to see both the good and not so good ones, as contrasting cases that will help the learners better understand what good writing is. (Do it as far as you can and appropriate).
  • In your portfolio you need to make it clearer how a cognitive apprenticeship model has been used specifically. I cannot clearly see it.
  • Lesson 2 objective: In the following, "learn" needs to be replaced with a performance verb such as "describe" "understand"...
"After completing this lesson, you will be able to
  1. learn the structure pattern of an independent writing task. "
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