Talk:Rebecca G.'s Portfolio Page

Initial feedback -- Janewilde (talk) 10:34, 22 October 2013 (EDT)

Rebecca,

Intro/Intent is clear. And you still are not addressing the Outcome question. I will send you an email explaining what I mean.

Your needs assessment is thorough. Excellent application of a survey in your needs assessment. You had interesting findings and insightful adaptations.

Your objectives are well written and address your intent. Once you define your outcomes (according to Gagne's definition) you may want to adjust these a bit to reflect your desired learning outcomes.

Jane

-- Jessica Witkowski (talk) 17:39, 26 October 2013 (EDT)

Hi Rebecca! Your page looks great so far! Your objectives seem clear and I am especially enjoying the way you formatted your curriculum map/ task analysis. I'm just curious though- how did you get that imbedded in your page? I think I'm going to have to create a link to mine, because I just can't seem to format it right on the screen.

More feedback -- Janewilde (talk) 23:58, 14 November 2013 (EST)

Additions and improvements make your portfolio very strong. You have a complete Analysis and Design plan. I'd like to see some references at the bottom of the page. But if you include references in your course I'll be happy.

Feedback -- Jamie Turman (talk) 19:05, 24 November 2013 (EST)

Rebecca,

So far I think you have a great project and it seems like you don't have much else to add or fix. I really like how your visuals are embedded into your page - I had a difficult time doing this and had to ask Jane for help, but I think it looks a lot better when it's embedded, so good job. I also like how detailed you were with your maps - these are something I found myself struggling with but it seems like you did a good job. I would recommend adding more visuals to your page aside from the maps you have if possible, I think it will help make the page more visually appealing.

Overall, good job. Jamie