Talk:Megan Zoerb

-- Joshua Lewandowski (talk) 12:13, 20 November 2013 (EST)

I liked how it was straight-forward and not confusing at all. I have multiple pages on my first lesson where the participant has to navigate between pages. Your course was just one one page (besides the video) and I feel like I was in the zone the entire time. I have never heard of your topic before in my life and there was no point where I was questioning something. I enjoyed the use of the video. You gave us background about the importance of collecting data from cold read and the video allowed us to see that put to practice. Also, providing the participants with what to look for when collecting data was a great idea. It gives participants of your course sort of a guide to use while collecting data.

The only thing you might want to do change a couple grammatical errors in one of your sentences in your paragraph on the importance of Corrective Reading program and Read Naturally software. Your sentence reads, “Students to do not respond to an teacher that is merely reading the script”. I could be wrong, but I think you meant to write, “Students do not respond to a teacher that is merely reading the script”. Other than that your first lesson was great in my opinion.