Talk:Dale Comley

-- James pisaturo (talk) 13:28, 4 December 2016 (EST)

Hi Dale,

I think that you are off to a good start.

You did a good job describing the population that this course was suited for. I feel that you are on your way in providing solid reasoning of importance of evaluating the process for creating written responses. The links from intro page to lesson one: Short vs. Extended worked well. All the links worked but repeated unit 1 info. Good examples from Common Core to illustrate point. You are at the beginning stages of chunking information into flowing system.

Have you considered using video or other media to illustrate points? Are you going to be providing the objectives for each lesson? Will each lesson have an assessment at end? Are there any interactive sites that you can connect short responses vs. extended responses concepts with; maybe in the assessment process? Is each unit going to have two lessons to describe activity?

Nice job so far,

James P.